@Bhagwad - This is a slightly modified format used for english - the idea is to use 17 syllables in total,irrespective of how many syllables each line has.For writing in japanese I follow the traditional 5-7-5 format.
Oh such a simple yet so very lovely Haiku. You are so right. I can actually feel my heart jumping with joy when my eyes see such beautiful sights..:D PS: Thanku for your last compliment at 'Fly Away Fly!'. The idiot that I am I hit the 'delete' instead of 'publish'. Extremely sorry and sad! :(
Yes definitely, this looks beautiful. I love to be in places decorated by god himself :)
ReplyDeleteHaven't seen anyone use the 6-4-7 haiku format before...
ReplyDeleteYou always follow this structure?
@Bhagwad - This is a slightly modified format used for english - the idea is to use 17 syllables in total,irrespective of how many syllables each line has.For writing in japanese I follow the traditional 5-7-5 format.
ReplyDelete@we cognize - Thanks !
Hmm - I haven't tried that before. Maybe I'll give it a whirl My own Haikus use the 5-7-7 format: http://www.bhagwad.com/blog/topics/haikus
ReplyDeleteOh yes :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written :)
@Swaram - Thank you ! you are too kind :)
ReplyDeleteOh such a simple yet so very lovely Haiku. You are so right. I can actually feel my heart jumping with joy when my eyes see such beautiful sights..:D
ReplyDeletePS: Thanku for your last compliment at 'Fly Away Fly!'.
The idiot that I am I hit the 'delete' instead of 'publish'. Extremely sorry and sad! :(
@Vibhuti - Thanks and welcome here !
ReplyDeletedont worry about the comment :)
Yes! :)
ReplyDelete@shail - ahh nature walks !
ReplyDeletePeaceful picture and a lovely Haiku to go with it. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteHmmpf! I hv nt been writing anything, but for the pics I post on Wednesdays and Thursdays too ;)
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