The first bud peeking out of the frost
like a stranger
unsure of his welcome
(This Haiku has been written for Haiku Heights. This weeks Prompt word was Stranger)
Nov 22, 2010
Haiku - First Bud
(This Haiku has been written for Haiku Heights. This weeks Prompt word was Stranger)
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I think it may not even be bothered about the Welcome.. blooming is what matters.
ReplyDeleteYet, it is a beautiful haiku as beautiful as the rose here.. well done..
how nicely put...'unsure of it's welcome'...
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, sweet, and delicate. The rose is certainly a beautiful stranger in winter. Nicely written.
ReplyDeletei m feeling cold....!!
ReplyDeletenice work ...keep going!!
Beautiful! I so loved the simile :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteI have been that first bud...
ReplyDeleteHH: Stranger Story
@Ramesh - Thanks and welcome here !
ReplyDelete@Scribbler - Thank you !
@Write Girl - Thanks and welcome!its always good to see blooms in winter !
@vivek - thanks
@Swaram - Thank you my dear !
@alphabet world - Thank you
@MM Teacher - thanks and welcome!
I can just feel how the bud must have felt peeking out! :)
ReplyDelete@Shail - :)
ReplyDeletevery beautiful.. :) the imagery here is well stated!
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