Aug 8, 2013

Age No Bar - 55 Fiction !

I love you so. He said earnestly. Just give me one chance.
Look at our age difference !
Loves knows no age, and you’re an adult at 23.
And you are too .....
She stopped. Unwilling to hurt his feelings.
Dejected he walked away.
He’s got loads of spunk for a 12 year old. She thought amused. 



Written for the Write Tribe 55 Fiction challenge.
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36 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiAugust 8, 2013 at 8:20 PM

    lovely. :)

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  2. UnknownAugust 8, 2013 at 8:36 PM

    aww!! <3

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  3. Arvind PasseyAugust 8, 2013 at 8:56 PM

    I've been reading these '55 fiction' bits for quite some time now... and I want to ask: Is this some sort of a short story that is ultra short? Are there any rules in it?

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Tall Girl in Japan August 9, 2013 at 9:39 AM

      Its micro fiction - you need to write in in 5 words. The tutorial on Write Tribe by Vidya will tell you more about it !

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  4. Corinne RodriguesAugust 8, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    Haha... Cheeky guy! ;)

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  5. UnknownAugust 8, 2013 at 10:40 PM

    yes saw a lot of that during my time, my colleagues falling over teachers...by the way that's actually how long those kind of love stories last...
    -Ayush

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    1. Tall Girl in Japan August 9, 2013 at 9:40 AM

      Oh yeah ! I think a whole lot of boys in this age group fall for their teachers ! Its a part of the whole growing up thing !

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  6. Richa SinghAugust 8, 2013 at 10:59 PM

    Ha! Well of course perfectly executed the story and the boy :D :D I recall my mother telling me one such incident where a sixteen year old fell for her :P

    Richa

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  7. Kajal KapurAugust 8, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    Well age is just a number...I would've asked the little boy to wait for a few years more ;) :P

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  8. RachnaAugust 9, 2013 at 9:02 AM

    hehe Nice twist! Look at the gall of the 12-year-old!

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  9. RituAugust 9, 2013 at 10:57 AM

    Ooh that 12 year old is going far in life ...

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  10. PurbaAugust 9, 2013 at 12:48 PM

    Just 12 more years and he'll be all grown up :p

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    1. Tall Girl in Japan August 10, 2013 at 8:57 PM

      yes ! But I suppose its a long wait for the poor fellow !

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  11. BhavanaAugust 9, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    Oh mother! LOL!

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  12. sulekkhaAugust 9, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    Young love :) Beautifully written.

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  13. Saru SinghalAugust 9, 2013 at 6:33 PM

    That was really cute.

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  14. Afshan ShaikAugust 10, 2013 at 4:04 PM

    I myself had such experiences :P but it was never serious
    Good one

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  15. AnonymousAugust 10, 2013 at 11:49 PM

    He needs to concentrate on his studies.

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  16. SuzyAugust 11, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    Yep, he sure has spunk! Loved it.

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  17. AkankshaAugust 12, 2013 at 4:06 AM

    Ek Choti Si Love Story ;-)

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  18. BK Chowla,August 12, 2013 at 9:17 PM

    A bit too grown up for a 12 year old?Isnt it ?

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  19. RickieAugust 14, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    A proud Dilliwala. Abhi se hi eve teasing shuru. Such kids are bound to go too far in life.

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  20. AnonymousAugust 15, 2013 at 1:16 AM

    As they say, age is just a number. Lucky u! Mushy:)Lovely post

    Cheerz
    Vishal

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  21. Karen XavierAugust 22, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    :) how cute he is... nice post.

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  22. Shilpa GargAugust 27, 2013 at 3:56 PM

    Aha!! Very smart kid!! :D

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  23. AnonymousAugust 29, 2013 at 5:50 PM

    :D I wasn't expecting the man to be a boy. :P
    Lovely 55er.

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